A Simple Reason Comments

a very fine write indeed, while reading this poem few verses of Mirza Ghalib came in my mind... hazaron khawaishain aisi keh har khawaish pe dum nikle bohat nikle meray arman lekin phir bhi kam nikley....thanks

beautiful attempt.... May your love swings ever sway, Let your of life you never betray, All your life be sunshine and hay, Your poetic art at peak display.

this is like a love song so lucid and simply flowing