A Simple Promise Comments

The poem is as much soothing, as reassuring!

don't ever close your eyes while staring at the sky might you'll miss the moonshine as witness for our love tonight... touching lines are they. a beautiful promise of love. thank you

Seems a promise of Eternity....as you hear the melodies of the mountain.... the pendulum of the clock to breath....for such love, hibernate the hearted soul of immortal journey...so sweet my dear friend... God bless....a 10 +++

the life of my soul is you and the breath that i take... as we walk the aisle of joy cross the bridges of emptiness....what animagination and promise and surity that withyou the emptiness goes with you.. i loved the stanza and lines.....10 read mine mary to marry...anywhere....come home...home bound

Very soft and touching write, so beautifully written, that reader can imagine the atmosphere

flow of language and writing are breathtaking.........

stunning, and swear like ive said, like 60 times before, as well as giving you 20 well deserved 10, my friend, are you sure we didnt date the same man, and or if not have the same relationship...lmao

Simple, lucid, lovely- beautiful poem.

your poems are really good. this one is a masterpiece.

The man you speak of is a truely blessed man, and lucky to have a lady shuch as you! ! ! . keep coming with the love, GOD knows we need more of it in the world today! ! !

don't ever close your eyes while staring at the sky might you'll miss the moonshine as witness for our love tonight... ....... Great lines. A great poem of sincere girl knee deep in love.

GRACE you touch the soul with your gentle and luke warm hands.......and delicacy of the soul sooths you and reader at every step.....love your writes

It has so much love in it, It is beautifully written

i like it but im a dark type poet so i only read sad or evil poems

feel my heart...i am yours feel my lips...t's all yours feel the warmth of my love it will never break your heart.. heartfelt and sweet romantic stanza.. poem is good and well written from the core of heart with loving mood.. well done.10++++++

Pretty declaration of love. I hope this passion will live forever. Congratulations!

Amazing love poem, I love the last stanza most.10+++

Romantic, very romantic poem. i like it with my 10.

How much I would love God to grant me the opportunity to find a Lady like you in my life...there will not be any more pain, sorrows, tears and and heartbreaking feelings...just happiness...God Bless you and keep the good work....love, Romeo

How much I would love God to grant me the opportunity to find a Lady like you in my life...there will not be any more pain, sorrows, tears and and heartbreaking feelings...just happiness...God Bless you and keep the good work....love, Romeo