A Simple Poetheart! Comments

Great poem concerning reality and life.

just a simple divine spark like we all were at beginning of the time Imperfect! but they say that God rules all over us and cling to it.... release me, let be me what i am......... lovely poem portraying problems of life, hypocrisy, fake nature of smiles........ the struggle to be oneself.... God is there who looks after me...... there alone i find my consolation......... thank you dear poetess for this poem. tony

Because it is fake to me. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Hello Stan, that is why i dint understand you! ! ! ! ! What a mess! ! ! ! KAKAKAKAKAKA

Nope, you are not that simple, Mirna, , ,

Poetheart, when we spoke I misspoke: I did not mean Parrot, I meant Lizard!

i m in this site for last two years. i missed u too much. i m in search of a poet heart. this one is lovely.beautiful soothing.....10 ++++

a simple poet heart is a great heart.

a simply poet heart is a beautiful heart. lovely read

A butterfly should be free to explore and wonder as is the poet.

No one is stopping you from being what you are. They can stop you only when you give them importance more than your own self. I sure you don't want to be freed. I cannot be stuck to someone that is not important. I will sacrifice my happiness only for those who are more important. I feel your intense love for someone in this piece. Well written.

Well if i am happy you dont mind? come one Mirna, i will let my happiness be yours and everyone around me... happy is to share...so same when you sad, share with us so the burden will be lessen...that's how friends work! _Soul

Your writing's release you and your are free. Very beautiful structure and words.

simple narration to release mind- good attempt

let me be what I am, yes, this is important, Stay what you are... so simple, poetheart! ! !