A Simple Plea Comments
Now on the shore I stand by thee
As we stare lonely out to sea.
We know ourselves, or say we do,
Though time has said we never knew.
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You've got some pretty powerful lines in this one. Woa. Nice work! DC
so delicate and endearing, such words float across the page as gentle and calm as the sea.
I read this poem with relish and i really enjoyed it. I do like your style of writing and i love the fact that it has echoes of Shakespeare. I never read more than one poem at a time so that i can consider how they affect me without being deluged/ I will read more.
Some times unspoken words reveals much and words are felt too short to described our emotions. Sometimes we need love but our pride prevent us from telling so............. Good Write.........
We cannot speak and say so much love this line. The poem is a beauty.
A realistic piece of wrting, easily understandable, exposing pride as the enemy of love, but still finding a ground to begin, actually to defeat pride. Very personal and sweet composition.10
Really I like the diction and peruse the theme. Standing on the shore...very nice and yes always there is plea...
the silence must have been defening, the yearning so sharp... heart-breaking...
This poem lilted right into my heart. Sea, I find, sets a mood and the wind and your memories adds to the pull of pride. The word thee is just so romantic. Loved it! Karin Anderson
this composition made me realize that not all pleas are granted and accepted...this is a nice expression on how a simple plea be failed....nice words written in simple expressive lines..lav ya.. naizz
this is truly, , , a lovely read...Thank You..... going my favorites
a gem of a poem...great display of emotions....sir you rock! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
awesome poem woven with fantastic rhymes and rhythm. Lovely imagery and the last part was lovely and sweet...a simple plea to love each other forever.........10+++
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7/18/2025 8:53:09 PM # 1.0.0
Lovely! I spent my earliest years in San Francisco, and still love the ocean, its constant motion and yet its peace. Your poem brought back some sweet memories!