A Simple Plea Comments

We Iranian's have a proverb 'that is to say.....'{keep me under your wings.} just whatever you say'...and yes it's yummy for me..about your poem...Lady that is very nice..and readable...10=

what a great trust....an infinitum of giving to the one LOVE.... my vow of respect to the poet....the romance that lay down of everything just to be one of the beloved....wish to reach that trust to the immortality of my soul to the heart that leads the way to its destiny...a 10 +++++

brilliant! accepting vulnerability to plead to be placed under the shelter of his wings Lovely. The emotions are remarkably vivid like a two-edge sword that cuts straight to the heart. Keep up the good work.

please don't ever ever go away keep me under your wings please..... stay with me.........and donot go away...it is so touchy feeling and this is staage where everybody go mad......10 read mine what abt tomorrow...cry not

Loves embrace To show how great Together two can be And how venerable loneliness can be Nice poem Lady Grace

It is wonderful, start with storm......great GRACE: : : :

wow two become 1 some times we need that other person to make us safe and to protect us emotionall, mentally and physically its more than a simple plea

a simple plea, for a 10, lol

'i am more than a great if you are here by my side i am more than excellent if i saw you in my eyes...' Lovely love poem. Lovely idea.10+++

a simple and lovely plea for love, affection, trust, etcetera. very interesting.

a concern and self esteem.......... let the simple plea come true....... see my 10 ++

Sometimes love is just a one way traffic and it doesn't bite on pity, be strong and show self esteem, if it's real it'll stay.