Thursday, December 11, 2008

A Simple Pain Comments

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With every breath I take I fall.
Pain is so overwhelming.
It's like holes in my path that keep me surrounded
It is what it is nothing more nothing less.
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Trinidad Villafranca
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Ramesh Rai 27 August 2012

his pain hurts were words can not describe this amount of pain. Under the shadows or reality It shows WE never were But YOU and HER! Again It's hard to consider the battle a victory or lost. Either way I pay the cost. So is it a victory or is it lost? It is what it is nothing more nothing less A battle fought a price paid. A simple pain. A nice, beautiful and brilliant compose. A great write

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 December 2008

A simple pain that lives in you, cured when your cured.A simple truth! ! Nice writes Trinidad.

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