Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, March 13, 2010

A Simple No To Relation Comments

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She wanted to end the relation
She had her simple calculation
How can I equate you with deserter?
All along you were my guide and master
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Christopher Tiganescu 17 March 2010

well done very nice painted a picture in my head u have down well keep writng

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L J Storm 16 March 2010

Well done, an insightful account of the most complex of emotions.

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Christopher Tiganescu 16 March 2010

Very Nice very well written, keep on writing

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Manonton Dalan 13 March 2010

it could be she has somebody or you have somebody. a broken glass can't be fix but dissolve. fire will only last for sometime. thanks, you can visit my poems too.md

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Indira Renganathan 13 March 2010

A common happening in real life well said....interestingly a nice reading

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Mark Nwagwu 13 March 2010

her smile says it all, doesn't it - well worth all the waiting and languishing and doubting and forsaking and.....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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