Monday, May 17, 2010

A Simple Little Letter Comments

Rating: 4.0

I love you is all want to say to you.
I do I do love you, sure it took some time but I know now that I really do.
I love you with all the little tiny fragments of my broken heart.
But no now that I want you, you want nothing, nothing to do with me.
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Kelsea Osterman
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* Stephen *king 27 November 2011

a good love poem full of emotion. Keep up the gud work. :)

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 May 2010

love intense bewilders at criss cross yet it riffles heaving by shadow of darkness, quite poignant, beautiful way of expression,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Annie Girl 26 May 2010

this is really good...

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its really good and truthful too..... I Love It its amazing keep writing always (: (:

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Manojit Biswas 20 May 2010

nice poem but really sad............then again our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thoughts...

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Iron Panda 23™ 20 May 2010

=(this makes me sad.....but i likes it...the way u expressed urself was reallly good (:

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