A Simple Journey Comments

A simple journey of love, the idea of love and trusr simply written Good play of words to arose filling: 'clouds may cover the sun darkness may fill our day thorns may spread at night night of heroic play.' ++10

who are you to blame me who are they to condemn who am i to refuse the love of this powerful man... magnificen inter weaving of words withpowerful imaginery thought bases onreal feeling..hats off dear....10 read mine 'blame me' real neighbour......

it is simple and so fine and read...............let the journey reach to paradise.........

very elegant and beautifully written. such an endearing journey indeed.

really good. i like it alot. great.

a touching you have written.10 shan

you are a great poet, i hope you keep on writing its truly a beautiful poem. lovely, passionately sweet loved the beginning yet the end even better.

It has a nice flow that keeps the reader interested and longing for more.

candid speech........true feelings...magic in writing.... wish ur journey to a wonderland of episodes. rgrds/salu

very nice....touching flowing with grace and love... very impressive... very poetic..i love the way your thoughts framed into poetry thanks for inviting 10+++++++ maia

The feelings of love of a young lady portrayed in a highly adorable style. Kudos.

well done you deserve10 out of 10

word has many to say but, i am entangled in your most passionate poem of “a simple journey'..... I do believe even if the sky wouldn’t shine I do wait, even the heart breath for you...I do believe that once in a while i have keep your lines in my life....thanks for sharing...God bless...a 10++++

wow. powerful words that makes the poem come to life.

awesome play on words.. the last stanza really pulls the poem together. great write!

A wonderful flow of crisp imagery....love tests the best of us at times...but when we meet half way.....a garden of many loving colours blooms in the heart....well penned and congrats on making it into the top 500...you deserve it

Lovely picturesque work Grace. Love has its ups and downs but he seems perfect for you! 10 Karin Anderson

your words are all full of grace and true love... you`re gifted twice... having found a love like that and and the beautiful words to show this love... one ten more!

this poem is exceptional.you got another fan, along with the 600 youve got already.lol..10 again

great poem..heroic play means a lot in this poem..this is a nice one, ..keep writing, i love your works..naizz