A Simple Hi Comments
It struck me out of the blue,
That I always looked out for you.
How is it that you never noticed me,
For once just look around and me you would see.
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The last two lines feels very familiar. A very simple yet expressive poem. Liked it.
Short and sweet poem...Heartfelt...Loved reading it Veena. Keep writing.
In my heart, you are. good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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8/2/2025 1:26:38 PM # 1.0.0
The opening to me is an accident, but gently the accident is overtaken by music. Nice, subtle, warm expression of thoughts which do not take a plunge because of low confidence of protagonist and current prevailing situation.