Tuesday, June 27, 2006

A Simple Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

How I used to make, when as a child so young,
a daisy chain, by hands that were so neat,
And around my neck, it was so very carefully hung,
those blooms with sunny centres, so petite.
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Ernestine Northover
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Walterrean Salley 26 November 2016

(A Simple Flower by Ernestine Northover.) **Beauty and Reflection.

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These were part of my childhood too Ernestine. Your imagery is wonderful and I can relate to all your words and 'flower words'. 10 Karin Anderson

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Andrew Blakemore 06 March 2008

This is so beautiful Ernestine, I love pastoral poems and this is up there with the best. Wonderful work. Andrew x

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Uriah Hamilton 06 July 2006

A very lovely poem, delicate beauty.

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Sandra Fowler 05 July 2006

Simplicity is an art and God is the greatest artist of all. He is the Creator of flowers and gifted poets. Lovely work, Ernestine. Warm regards, Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 27 June 2006

Daisy! daisy! give me your answer do, in a, poem, caught in a time by you A wonderful moment caught in the heart of a wonderful person Love Duncan X

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R H 27 June 2006

I sat in the garden and made a daisy chain only the other day - they were about to be mown over! Your poem captured the perfection of these simple flowers in such detail - a beautifully observed composition Ernestine. Warmest wishes, Justine.

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Daniel Tyler 27 June 2006

I admire anyone who can fit 'dasiy chains' in perfect metre- I was going to use it for Middle Class Romance but couldn't make it work! What this poem shows, is your power in making the everyday parts of life seem extraordinary. The eye for detail is unimpaired, Ernestine.

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William Jackson 27 June 2006

Lovely poem. Well said! One of the most refreshing poems I have read in a while.

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