What starts the whole thing moving?
The flap of as wing or the first trill;
a flash of light that made you believe
in living; the pure taste of spring water -
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Fascinating poem, Daniel! Questioning and answering, showing both sides of a mind while writing, very succinct and unselfish, enjoyed this one very much! Thank you for sharing, give it a 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ RoseAnn
This poem came out of me the way yours come out of you.. I wrote it in just a few minutes and it didn't need revision. I like your notion of BOTH SIDES OF A MIND WHILE WRITING
Everything that happens in life needs a simple explanation. If the mind is able to simplify life, it's so much easier to go through the ups n downs of our existence. Yes, it's just a flash of light we need to believe in living. Life will be good if living and giving go hand in hand. A very inspirational write that seeks to answer questions we all have in mind. A huge 10.