Sunday, August 5, 2007

A Simple Daydream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pure imagination indeed
Reality wanted and needed at the same time
A physical love
An emotional love
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Jennifer Unknown
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Elinor Auerbach 30 September 2007

Its so full of images and brings me back to so many of my own thoughts and desires, very personal and full of familiar thoughts... it says things as I would like to say them, I really enjoyed it.

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Richard A. Davis SR. 03 September 2007

This is very beautifully and artfully done- to tongue tied to say anymore, - very nice.

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Gabriel SimpsonLaw 24 August 2007

Jennifer, Beautiful, soft and sensuous, I love this, it feels like love. Perfect

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Manish Jain 21 August 2007

Hi, very beautiful poem....is it yr inter feeling?

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Brian Mills 13 August 2007

ive learned that some daydreams DO come true....dont stop dreaming! ! Brian

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