Thursday, March 7, 2019

A Silver Line Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds wear wet, wet gloom,
In grey darkling plume,
For silver line where's the room?
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 March 2019

Excellent haiku with superb imagery. Cleverly written.

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 March 2019

Thank you so much Rose Marie, your feedback is valuable.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 March 2019

Cloud's appearance motivate mind and we feel tenderness of expression. This poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 March 2019

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul, it's so nice to hear your views.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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