Monday, September 7, 2009

A Silly Poem Comments

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They flew on a moonbeam
and danced on the stars
the giraffe looked at the kangaroo
and said how do you do.
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David Harris
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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 22 June 2012

The effect is energetic- the bizarre links make the silliness more profound. Well, I'ld have given a 12...: -)

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Alison Cassidy 17 September 2009

Gorgeous nonsense - Lewis Carroll would be proud. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Marilyn Lott 10 September 2009

An adorable and fun poem, David, that captures the attention of readers from all ages. Loved it - '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Reshma Ramesh 10 September 2009

hhaha...what an amusing write....loved it thanks for sharing sir

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Carol Gall 07 September 2009

david this was imaginative fantastic i loved it all

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Rani Turton 07 September 2009

I thoroughly enjoyed this lovely poem!

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David Harris

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Bradfield, England
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