Sunday, March 4, 2018

A Silly Mistake Comments

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Just when i felt secure with you
You pulled the rug from beneath me feet
A silly mistake was all it took
I cannot win no matter what i do
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susette varga
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Bri Edwards 21 March 2018

You seem to forget i am not your ex................this is my favorite line of the poem. i have 3 ex's but don't hate any of them! Why unable are you to embrace...........i kind of like your word arrangement, but it is strange to read this way, rather than: Why are you unable to embrace (to be continued) ..........

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