A Silly Little Wish ☼ Comments

This one made me smile, I really liked it, , i belive that wishes come true too.

If only everything wereso easy. A wish upon a star andeverything comes true. Great write.

very nice...especially the sun symbol u have appende to the poem....feels like a laze in a meadow...waiting for some one... very well captured aura cheers

i looked to my right. i saw candles. i saw candles on a pink cake. i made a wish. i made a wish to be with you! a master piece indeed.. how you made this poem is really amzing and imteresting... yes, he is every where..right, left, back and at front and even up and down..it indicates to the supreme God.. who is no where but every where..well done..liked it very much 10/10

this was very creative and clever too, it was very cute and heart warming very great work Ash 10/10

This was so cute, and the technique of the poem is wonderful and creative :)

i m left speechless... i mean hw can u love sumbody so much... one of the best poems i have read on poemhunter or elsewhere.... you touched my heart... thank u God bless