Tuesday, November 1, 2011

A Silent Wave Comments

Rating: 4.1

Silver coins beside the origin
The eyes of pearls in margin
Wearisome looks over me
Originated a margin we.
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Ruma Chaudhuri 23 April 2014

Excellent. Nice poem. Unarmed war of her Beyond the scraps of our love I am empty in this world Splitting empty in emptiness. excellent expression. thanks for sharing this beautiful. Ruma

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Karen Sinclair 15 June 2012

Hello... I read this as a sensual moment... followed by quiet segregation...beautiful...tyvm Karen

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Samuel Leumas 01 February 2012

Nice one brother. Nice rhymn and imagery

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 January 2012

A very nice piece of work. Thanks for shearing it with us. E.K.L.

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Just like the oceans drive

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lover of poetry sweet 07 November 2011

a breath's pointed violence and unarmed war of her simply super keep on and on

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Krystyna M 05 November 2011

I really like this poem.

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Mackenzy Edmonds 03 November 2011

i loved the way everything was put together

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grame peele 03 November 2011

your emotions can be felt truly. you bring the effect in few lines.10

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Tasha Scott 01 November 2011

i really like this one! ! ! !

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