A Silent Tear (Sample) Comments

There are humans but no humanity left inside They hurt their loved one’s with the dagger of lies A silent tear dropped inside wow Sooooooooooooooo True Sooooooooo True I got no other words Great Write sooo expressing simply Great

we can not help each and every one who suffers in life...but dropping a tear or two in compassion is worthy of mind...good content 10

heart-felt expression indeed. I liked it............10+

A tear dropped inside.....ur heart is crying...its wet...compassionate and sympathizing...but ur hands are tied.It shows ur helplessness...as u become a mute spectator....u are struggling within to bring the change...as a first step towards a revolution.... a tear has broken its bonds... soon ur voice will soar, soon ur soul will awake.... soon the change will come, when a tear in every eye does break. This is ur best Aijaz....A heartening topic rendered effectively....10 for ur heart.

I liked your comment at the end, that you thought it was incomplete. You are correct, it is. But it is also quite long as well for the message you are trying to send. Your basic problem is that you say in four lines what you could say in one. You write far too much on each point. You waste too many words. Focus on a single phrase to convey a complete thought. Even one word may do so. If you work on this, you will also more clearly see what you think which is not there. No poem of that length on that subject should be so long. I cannot recommend it. GW62

A very touching and heart felt poem U get 10++++

Very touching poem....very revealing subject, ,10.. (Please read my poems LIVING IDOL & HOLY TRINE)

Very beautiful....I really enjoyed this one.....I give you 10+.....

We can't stop 'A silent tear dropped inside'! Emotion bleeds, this is universal. But we feel mourning. This is a nice piece of emotion. 10 for this brilliant composition.

beautiful and thought provoking