Monday, July 4, 2016

A Silent Spell Comments

Rating: 5.0

My head went silent
An emptiness swallowed my thoughts
I was numb to any emotional prick
I couldn't feel my state of being
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Kenneth Maswabi
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Lyn Paul 04 July 2016

An amazing description of pain. Perfect lines for a story.

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Brigid Walshe 04 July 2016

oh, I like, love the line 'to paint them with emotions'

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Kenneth Maswabi

Kenneth Maswabi

Maun, Botswana
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