Friday, November 1, 2024

A Silent Shoulder Comments

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Sometimes, I say, 'I'll handle it, don't worry.'
Yet a part of me wishes you'd stay,
Not to fix my broken edges,
But just to be here, quietly.
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Anitha Vijayakumar
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Very interesting poem… expressions like ‘ a part of me', ‘ hand held out in silent endurance' …loved.

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Mana Kavingyan 01 November 2024

Nice poem about expecting the moral support

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Rob Lamberton 01 November 2024

Thank you! I need reminded that keeping my mouth closed and providing my silent presence is often the best way to love!

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Anitha Vijayakumar 07 January 2025

Sometimes silence is the best way to show love. But there are also moments when your words of support can make all the difference, offering comfort and strength when they need it most.

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D.N. Rebb 01 November 2024

How true this poem is, Anitha. The presence of support definitely strengthens the soul. And I love the line - Not to fix my broken edges.

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