Sunday, November 21, 2021

A Silent Prayer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ya Allah!
I am terrified to be a detainee
In your grasp for my transgressions
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 November 2021

Liked the recurring lines and the ultimate stanza. Wonderful prayer.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 November 2021

A poem of great faith and humility. Powerful yet tenderly expressed.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 November 2021

I don't know what to say...this poem left speechless Bravo!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2021

Ya Allah! I am prepared to say farewell to this world Anchor my existence in the hereafter, I beg.....I profusely admire the humble prayer of poetess. A sublime piece of work....top score!

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