I feel am tied with chains
I suffer everyday, my body pains,
Am tired of doing the hospital rounds
Undergoing various tests or scan ultrasound,
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Miseries of a man having deadly disease are depicted well through your verses in this poem....Agonies suffered by him can be seen in your words....With out seeing him one can visualise the pathetic condition of the sufferer because of your skill in narration.....Well done Kavya....10/10! ! !
There are many who suffer like this! When we are healthy, we never think of the blessings of a sound body! I too join you in this ardent prayer....Kavya! Great expression of compassion and a sweet poem!
yes Mam agree with you. Thank your for the prayer.