Hope the last retreat
A silent plea
A quite supplication
Of the heart
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This is quietly gorgeous and wise- I am an admirer of short poems that get a message across both philosophically and spiritually, but also with an atmosphere, a mood, a tone whether bright or dark. That is a lot to pack onto six lines but you did it magnificently. 10++++++++ not that the ratings chart works
steps ahead moments to the end of the existence one day breath meets the departure station
A prayer made with complete humility is always acknowledged and answered by the God Almighty. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
A wonderful short work....5 stars