today...
still nothing, just a silent pains...
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a typical poem to describe how our pains are incarcerated within our hearts..it does not take us much time to express our emotions provided we dropp our shyness or ego or anything that stops us.
Silent pains lead to rage and depression, it's better to express them in any way or another. Sport is one outlet, poetry is another. Both serve to release the pain and calm the beating heart... I invite you to read 'A poetess wrath', you'll see how a woman releases her pain and her rage. Good write.
there are pains that are better kept sient, without knowing what it is, i feel the pain too.this is the best way it can be expressed, the massage is great!
There's a great message behind this poem.. i enjoyed reading it very much. great work!
WoW beautiful exepresion enhancing with honestly feeling and that is the main needing in the safe world with my best wishing Laila Lili
Very matured stroke by pen beautifully constructed keep going
hazeem i can sense your silent pains it touched me a great deal thanks for sharing this lovely piece love anju
Silent pains can drive a person to suffer intense self-pity and sorrow. Most people experience such agony, why can't we express and not keep the pain to ourselves to let it go to make it ease out from within. Sad but true that we can't let go of the silent pains. Good write, I can realte to it. Top mark.
hazem - so intense...such misery you find in the silence, the dark. I see another world in my, 'Be Quiet Please.' Tell me if you like it. Best wishes - Cheryl
wonderful! ! really beautiful! ! ! deep and intense! ! love it! !
heeey i love it btw i really like the way u write i like your style alooot and good luck in life
deep, intense, i reallyliked this one. its message was moving. good work
Hi, I have no words to describe. It's simply wonderful. My heart cries.
i love your poems it full of emotion and readers can relate on it. i like this Silent Pains because i saw alot of housewives being in that situation and i'm one of them. you've got a 10 from me. P.S. I'm not an arab.
This is a nice Poem. I give all my pain to my God. However, I keep all my pain Inside me. I can understand this poem. Nice Job.
The poem written with crimson blood, so pain and so hurt....literally and heartfelt...That's mean you have power in your hand that make your poem so real for readers...anyway i wish all the best for her for one day she will find the glory day and win over sadness..peace! Salam_Unwritten Soul