Monday, September 3, 2012

'A Silent Night, A Holy Night' Comments

Rating: 4.9

The sun has set and the shadows fled
The feathered flocks, flown to their nest
Weary men after the day's toil and care
Are back home for sleep and rest
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 June 2020

The rule of Silence is so touchingly and vividly delineated by you here. Let me cite...Silence rules and peace prevails / The sky is clear and the stars do glimmer / No bird sings and no beast strays / /No tramp wanders and no lights shimmer. Fantastic.10

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Loke Kok Yee 22 October 2015

This poem I read deep in the night and it brought peace into my heart Thanks Valsa-10+++

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Ajit R Kanale 21 July 2015

'Glow worms reel on wings of fire' - brilliant words! Beautiful picturisation of the night. Loved it!

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Bharati Nayak 20 July 2015

With wonderful flow of words the poem is really soothing.

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A rich and refreshing reflection my friend!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 16 April 2015

Very good poem, well-rhymed. Night is well-described as God-sent rest time for all life to recuperate. (10)

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Heather Wilkins 28 November 2014

a beautiful writing a holy night yo bury our woes and a God sent time to ease our spirits

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John Richter 18 November 2014

Valsa, you have such a beautiful talent. How pleasant it is to read through your poetry. Please consider adding a biography page so that we can better know you. -John

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Saheb Mohapatra 05 November 2014

fluttering leaves sing a lullaby...................great poem, mam.............i have never seen such an outstanding description of nature..........the aroma of your poem has the ability to reach the core of one's heart and it really does........your imaginations can be surely compared to the love poems of WILLIAM.............thanks.

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A. Madhavan 31 August 2014

Glad to see you are composing lines with melodic tones and upbeat spirit. A. Madhavan

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Neela Nath Das 31 August 2014

Congrats! A beautiful poem......

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When day is done and night has begun to sing the earth to rest... nice peaceful poem about earning that rest after a day of toiling...a ten..

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Savita Tyagi 31 August 2014

This brings peace to any tired heart. Congratulations for being selected for member poem of the day.

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Amitava Sur 31 August 2014

Congrats for the recognition and expecting more an more Shimmering and glimmering with per excellence............. A beautiful write with a peaceful night with all good wishes! ! ! ! ! !

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Leslie Philibert 31 August 2014

Well written quatrains in ABCB rhyme, V3 and V5 don`t stay in the pattern, so maybe a re-write would make it even better..

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Leslie Philibert 31 August 2014

Well written quatrains in ABCB rhyme, V3 and V5 don`t stay in the pattern, so maybe a re-write would make it even better..

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Sandra Feldman 31 August 2014

The beauty of this grandiose piece Brings to our soul luminous peace. A delicately perfumed winner . Thank you, Valse

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 31 August 2014

Nice sweet melodious lullaby taking one to a dream world. Excellent write. well deserved to be the poem of the day. Congratulations!

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Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2014

Congrats. A nice selection for poem of the day. A beautiful poem.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 August 2014

So beautifully crafted with sweet and soothing words I felt serene and so quiet I need no more sleep at this moment of night........Valsa......you are amazing........also I must not forget to congratulate you for your poem Dust unto Dust being selected poem of the day..........

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