The sun has set and the shadows fled
The feathered flocks, flown to their nest
Weary men after the day's toil and care
Are back home for sleep and rest
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This poem I read deep in the night and it brought peace into my heart Thanks Valsa-10+++
'Glow worms reel on wings of fire' - brilliant words! Beautiful picturisation of the night. Loved it!
A rich and refreshing reflection my friend!
Very good poem, well-rhymed. Night is well-described as God-sent rest time for all life to recuperate. (10)
a beautiful writing a holy night yo bury our woes and a God sent time to ease our spirits
Valsa, you have such a beautiful talent. How pleasant it is to read through your poetry. Please consider adding a biography page so that we can better know you. -John
fluttering leaves sing a lullaby...................great poem, mam.............i have never seen such an outstanding description of nature..........the aroma of your poem has the ability to reach the core of one's heart and it really does........your imaginations can be surely compared to the love poems of WILLIAM.............thanks.
Glad to see you are composing lines with melodic tones and upbeat spirit. A. Madhavan
When day is done and night has begun to sing the earth to rest... nice peaceful poem about earning that rest after a day of toiling...a ten..
This brings peace to any tired heart. Congratulations for being selected for member poem of the day.
Congrats for the recognition and expecting more an more Shimmering and glimmering with per excellence............. A beautiful write with a peaceful night with all good wishes! ! ! ! ! !
Well written quatrains in ABCB rhyme, V3 and V5 don`t stay in the pattern, so maybe a re-write would make it even better..
Well written quatrains in ABCB rhyme, V3 and V5 don`t stay in the pattern, so maybe a re-write would make it even better..
The beauty of this grandiose piece Brings to our soul luminous peace. A delicately perfumed winner . Thank you, Valse
Nice sweet melodious lullaby taking one to a dream world. Excellent write. well deserved to be the poem of the day. Congratulations!
Congrats. A nice selection for poem of the day. A beautiful poem.
So beautifully crafted with sweet and soothing words I felt serene and so quiet I need no more sleep at this moment of night........Valsa......you are amazing........also I must not forget to congratulate you for your poem Dust unto Dust being selected poem of the day..........
The rule of Silence is so touchingly and vividly delineated by you here. Let me cite...Silence rules and peace prevails / The sky is clear and the stars do glimmer / No bird sings and no beast strays / /No tramp wanders and no lights shimmer. Fantastic.10