Thursday, May 14, 2015

A Silent Message Of Lips Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know your refrain not easy to embrace,
An effort is needed to find a place,
But I also know we can come at a point,
Where heat can’t melt an emotional joint,
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Hazel Durham 24 May 2015

A beautiful love poem that is uplifting with such great imagery that is spellbinding!

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 May 2015

A Beautiful romantic poem walking in flowery garden. Beautiful flow of words, cool and pleasant to read. Loved reading it.

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Bisma Mirza 16 May 2015

Amazingly Beautiful.... Great.............10 on 10 :)

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Valsa George 14 May 2015

Lovely poem Akhtar ji! What heated imagination! ! On the roof I shall come with joys and jokes, In an evening that comes after heat strokes, When the pleasant winds start a romance, And flowery creeper when starts a dance, Love these lines and ofcourse........ the last line!

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Khalida Bano Ali 14 May 2015

A beautiful romantic poem.......................10

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