Sulphur
Is waiting to explode-
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Dear Valsa George Thanks I am happy you got the message through All the best
This oblique style adds depth and intensity to your thoughts. Well done. Top marks!
The last part of the poem speaks so loud! There is unrest and explosive situations all around! This agitates a sensitive mind so much. I see here the yearning of a poet to return to state of calm. Poetry is a canopy under which he can seek shelter.
Well done, thanks Madam Susan، you are right, here silently we can feel all conflicts and struggling in our miserable world, by reading the language of things, By taking advantage of the characteristics of things and employing them inside the poem, I was waiting for this amazing comment long time ago, Many Thanks
Oh, let me add that a thousand 19's would not honor this poem enough! 10+++++++ and onto my favorite list
There is so much beauty of expression in this poem- it cannot be written in a silent language because it speaks so strongly. It certainly did speak strongly to my soul.
Thank you Dear poet Rose Marie Juan Austin for visiting this quite and abandoned poem, your way of reading this poem tells me how professional you are, really it is amazing comment, your view is important to me and appreciating it, All the Best, take care
A beautiful poem embellished with wisdom and insight. Thought provoking lines that lead the mind to ponder the wonderful and deep words embedded in this write. " And stones change chatter to silence So the Earth may hear stones breathing." Great lines from a wonderful poem. So brilliantly crafted. Onto my Poem List.
Sometimes a silent language can speak louder than anything. It has that power to penetrate the core of being and lead to a greater understanding of what we want to know in this life.
Dear Robert M Smith you are right in the silence environment we can understanding the reality of thing far away from the war of media, then we be able to create and understanding each others, thanks for your lovely comment
Spirits! ! Minds in order, Muse of a silent language. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
the famous poet on poemhunter (((((Edward Kofi Louis))))) excellent comment with kind regards
Excellent Poem, silence is the most powerful language which one can use to communicate effectively. By simply looking at the face, situation, and the changes in the nature one can understand what message the other person/thing/nature wants to convey... As you rightly said: When the beach is quiet The Earth May look after all its spirits.....Sublime.5 Stars