Tuesday, January 9, 2007

A Silent Death Comments

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AND IM CRYING
and i have no reason why
thoughts are racing in my head
feelings of dread
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Melissa Ferrer
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Shekhar Joshi 02 June 2009

excellent poem......u expressed your emotions really well the lines which struck me were: They are trying to win a battle while i stay focused on winning the war excellent i should say

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Shelby Blehm 25 April 2007

I love it! You can feel the emotion pouring out of it. I can't read any more of your poems right now cause I'm short of time since I'm at school right now. but you can bet I will later!

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Melissa Ferrer

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