Monday, March 28, 2005

A Silenced Scream Comments

Rating: 4.9

There’s always a voice inside me,
That screams and calls my name,
This voice always says that I’ve done wrong,
But am I the one to blame?
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Torie Way
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Tiffany Lai 29 March 2005

Really like your poem, they're a lot better than mine (hehe) ...Write more poems! ! !

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Candice Williams 28 March 2005

A silenced scream... Love that title! By the way I think your poem is very cleverly crafted to portray that feeling just right... <-I hope that made sense.. ^_^

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Mary Nagy 28 March 2005

I think we all (hopefully) hear our inner voice...I call mine my conscience. I really like this poem. You've captured how I think many people feel. Great poem. I look forward to reading more of your work, we may just share similar voices... Sincerely, Mary

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