A Silence I Can Not Name Comments

You have chosen a title that captures the interest of the reader. The last line could perhaps read [silence than to have others feel for me]. Good effort here. Adeline

This one needs both a spell check and a definition explanation in order to make sense. I suggest a very close rereading by a close friend. GW62

This ones a mind twister, sister. Makes me back up and read it again and again, each time givng it more thought. Nice work.

keeping feelings inside dose not help very well said