Thursday, June 24, 2021

A Silence. Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

A tear trickles down.
A blossom sprouts from the ground.
A deep silence found.
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Rebecca Navarre
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Rob Lamberton 17 December 2022

Deep emotions met with silence…familiar ground. Thanks for sharing!

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Anjandev Roy 18 January 2022

Fantastic work...thank u...

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Shakira Nandini 04 July 2021

You who cry, you do not have the manner to cryTears are for drinking, not for shedding

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 July 2021

Our pains can give birth to a beauty. A great haiku. To my Poem List

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 July 2021

Our tears can be an avenue of a better world.

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M Asim Nehal 25 June 2021

Awesome. The ultimate solace of pain.5****

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 June 2021

Lovely Haiku, dear Becca. What makes it exquisite is the way you connect trickling down of a tear-drop and the sprouting up of a blossom and the deep (eternal) silence. Wow! ! ! All the five stars and onto myfav

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Kostas Lagos 24 June 2021

This wonderful silence...Excellent haiku

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 June 2021

Bravo! I do agree

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 June 2021

I have just read and reread again, it is truly beautiful, everything you wrote here is Beautiful, the Graphic you added so touching!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 June 2021

I am speechless, dear Becca, just BEAUTIFUL! 5 Stars full and to my Favourites. The time schedule is not good for me.BUT I am very happy to read your new poems again

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 June 2021

This brilliant haiku invites my poetic soul to the domain of tranquility!

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