Wednesday, August 19, 2009

A Sign Of Death Comments

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One that's recumbent
Locked in a small cell
My dream there it went
To ring someone else's bell
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Lorena Lalen Cruz
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Danzen D. 12 September 2009

Sad...I had to wipe the moist in my eyes in the end...signs...opportunities to love those near to say farewell more...chances to say everything you want to say, and hear those you want to hear...but also sometimes darts that hit the bulls-eye marks...nice poem, keep writing.

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Nashy Lamen 21 August 2009

It's critical for me to be talking about death, .. But you express so well... Your strong... and In any other poem, you express so nicely... Good write! ... =)

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Julia Pascual 20 August 2009

this really makes someone think... on how life will be... nice poem... keep it up..

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Aron Lelei 19 August 2009

Nice but know that death is part of life. Parting has no retreat but wounds of sorrow. It is a 10.

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