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such a lot of emotions you have put on the sky..the river and flower

Very nice written, very well described, and very whole touching

Wonderful composition. Specially, the last five lines are too good.

Shamik, this is a lovely poem. you have emptied your heart and showed the true feelings well done. keep on composing. you write well..

Shamik, This is a nice poem, and your first and penultimate lines have wonderful imagery, so much so that these lines tell a story of their own and can be enjoyed as delightful word arrangements in their own right. John T