A Sidewalk Comments
I am a sidewalk that cannot handle another footstep;
A bone that is too weak to be broken
because it halted growth and from motion is kept.
And I'm the game machine spitting out tokens.
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your first line reminded me of these lines from W.B. Yeats' 'Crazy Jane on God' I had wild Jack for a lover; Though like a road That men pass over My body makes no moan But sings on: All things remain in God. (ps: the whole poem is on POEMHUNTER)
YES! ! Excellent concept(s) , development. all-around, Colette. ~~sjg
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10/21/2025 11:18:36 PM # 1.0.0
'Im the game machine spitting out tokens'- what a great line. fantastic poem