A Side Order Of Fries Comments

Crystal Clear Composed, Bruilliantly worded, dear LeeAnn. TOP Marks 5 Stars! TFS

Wow! ! Makes me think again about soldiers who are use to taking orders!

A powerful, incisive and poignant poem. Beautifully narrated and crafted.

A soldier is the guardian and proud of a nation. He must be afforded with utmost protection and promotion of his welfare.

Our soldiers deserve so much better. Your lovely poem does a fine job of bringing the issue to light.

We sympathize with the poet in the crises he is going through, he is kind-hearted and sincere, but sometimes things are out of his hands, but we wish him success and happiness, thanks for this beautiful poetry

And the heat is burning the sidewalk Cooking your feet as you seek employment