I've chosen, I'm going to take a left, and head straight towards her in the forest, not the grove…
…I want to tell her, but someones holding me back…
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dayyyumm fool thats awesome! ! that was bold and a fantastic read. keep it up man
it flows nicely i reminds me of something that happened to/about me once - that's the important thing - people being able to relate to your words :)
Wow I really like this poem. It shows a lot of pain and suffering. I feel the same way sometimes toward God. Hell I'm atheist.10/10. Love it.
I like this one, because you put your heart in it, it was something new for me to read, the one part that I did like the most was at the end when you said 'let me goe close to her, please if you have a heart, just let go of me.' It dose makes me wonder if God dose has a heart, because of thepain he put us all through every day Robin Miller