A Sickness Lurks Within Comments

Unfortunately this is the plight everywhere. Greed, crime and violence like cancer is eating up our vitals! We often tend to take things for granted! A lament like this itself is purgative! Powerful write!

Oh, what a wonderful thoughtful write, and such a great flow to the poem, the content is the same in a good deal of the world it would seem, but just written so well, somehow you made it a pleasure to read..

A very true to life poem Joe i love the story and also how well it rhym's.wonderful Joe. This should have been given a 10.