Wednesday, May 9, 2018

A Sick Child Comments

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A good amount of motivation
From the fountain of cognition,
There was pelting on my umbrella
The locus of passion went la la la la la,
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Anil Kumar Panda 09 May 2018

Very nice poem. Enjoyed the style in which you have told the story. Thanks for sharing.

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Oratile Diratsagae 09 May 2018

This is interesting..... i understand every line. I love how you get into my head. This is one of the poems that i can read for pleasure. It is nice how you put the story. I have to read it a lot. Much love

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