Sunday, November 23, 2008

A Shower Comments

Rating: 5.0

Water flowing down his black-haired head like the Greeks'
Streaming past his dark eyebrows and his deep eyes
Down his sharp nose and past his smooth cheeks
Dripping down his lush lips, past the mouth's rise
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Monalno Kim
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Blue Eyes 27 November 2008

you r so good at description u do have a real talent.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 November 2008

Finely penned! Ammmmmmmazing rhyme! and theme is WOW! 10+

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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2008

sensual haan--water cascading down his hard body regards anjali

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Marria Attar 23 November 2008

Amazing Poem! I really like the way you connect the words and how you make them rhyme..Great Job!

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