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Surperb Haiku! Water is the Life and these lovely lines express it so well!
So succinct yet so profound write. Great brevity.10++++
A beautifully penned Haiku. A shower of rain is a blessing. It revives life.10
A nice poetic imagination, Simon. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
A beautiful poem about A Shower of Rain.. thank you for sharing.
Oh yeah water is life as this lovely haiku beautifully reminds us. Kudos. U r the haiku master. Nice to read from your pen again, a merry hapy new year to u,
Celebrating life through this beautiful Haiku. Thanks for sharing drops of your lovely poems. Wish you a Very Happy New Year.
Superb Haiku, The rain gives life to this planet as we all rejoice at the bountiful feast, as the rain pours down to cleanse the world and a fresh new day brings hope to feed the world!
Wow cool rain refreshing haiku. Lovely to read. Thumbs up. Pls do coment my latest poem on boxer Ali.
We finally got a nice rain today. The plants and I rejoiced. Thanks, Howard
A capsule of inspiration, insightful, speaks your skill level, the best thanks
Yes, its life that pours down from the clouds, a wonderful Haiku.
Beautiful Haiku.....! Drought lifting, Plants sprouting, Life flourishing........!
This is so beautiful. The second line, hunger and death reversing says a lot. In Africa n desert regions, so many lives fade due to drought. So rain is truly a blessing for mankind. It is indeed as you say life descending. A lovely haiku that sounds like rain dropping rhythmically n gently.
With raindrops, life descends on earth, hunger and death disappear and 'all life rejoice'! A beautiful scenario encapsulated in just three lines. A profound poem.10/10.