A Shot At Romance Comments
She was only ever ‘that girl’,
The one who always awoke instantly from the sound of:
An angry door slamming,
A single tear hitting the cold floor,
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Ah yes, the vagaries of passion. The misunderstood expectations and consolations of a hungry heart. I can't can't stop thinking how much abnegation, redemption, and rebirth can be made out of a reaction of this magnitude. Anyway, it's a good reminder of not-so-innocent solace.
to beat in one, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , why not......? when two love each others they may be far away but their hearts beats together..... sweet poem...... Go On....! ! ! 1
Hi Emma, Your poem contains strong, original imagery to convey the variegated shades of love, including the more shady ones. good work! I'll try to make more detailed feedback next time; with the first day of spring I've been outside most of the day and shall be again tonight. I'm off to view a local department store's 40th anniversary reenactment of the famous John Lennon/Yoko Ono 'bed-ins' of 1969, in one of their storefront display windows! Take care, Paul
This is a great poem. Nice to see another talented young poet. Hreat piece. Keep up the good work. Don't let anyone tear you down.
The poem says' a lot about insecurity, a choice love or death, love is better death is uncertain Warm regards AJS
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7/31/2025 11:14:03 AM # 1.0.0
lovely poem emma...i like your style of creating imagery... next time i'll comment more.. thanks for sharing. best regards, jdh811