Monday, August 5, 2013

A Short Yellow Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

small in stature
yet long in sweet prose;
barely peering above unkempt weeds
beauty becomes its silent words, speaking
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Smoky Hoss
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Noreen Carden 29 October 2013

Hello Smoky such a beautiful poem it is an absolute joy to read

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Patti Masterman 14 August 2013

I love that old saying, that surely god loves us for he gave us 'beer'. (in my opinion we do much better with poetry; first the poetry then later on the booze, if we must booze..booze leads to snooze.. if I had wit, I'd write a skit..better stop, while I'm at the top. ;)

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Valerie Dohren 14 August 2013

Lovely Smoky, a great metaphor.

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Juan Olivarez 07 August 2013

This is so beautiful Smoky. The meek shall inherit the Earth.

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Dave Walker 05 August 2013

A wonderful poem, sometimes beauty is so close but we never see it for whats in front of it. Maybe a lot of us should look closer.

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