Tuesday, February 24, 2009

A Short Verse Comments

Rating: 5.0

stillborn
reborn
wife dying
child crying
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Indira Renganathan 05 June 2009

Quite insightful giving a faithful approach to life....thanks for sharing

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Kesav Easwaran 27 April 2009

i love this write as a whole...a short verse going long in its insight...and far in its meaning...10

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I love the first lines its great Krista

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Vaibhav Pandey 25 February 2009

Short but satuated with intelligence.

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Sandra Fowler 25 February 2009

You have found your poetic voice in this one.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra

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Eddie Roa 24 February 2009

A truth well told. excellent write.

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