Monday, July 9, 2007

A Short Story Comments

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A wind blows gently in the night, filling the place where I just left. Whistling down the beaten path, through trees that are green and amongst the fallen brush. Is this just wind or is this something else?
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girl from ipanema 12 July 2007

wow. this is great. I really like the poem a lot. very expressive

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R. S. Farris 10 July 2007

in my opinion, this is your best yet. would be interesting to see it structured into shorter lines, though this format fits it well too. good job setting the mood of this one.

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