Thursday, July 31, 2008

A Short Short Poem Comments

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Anonymous 28 April 2020

It’s too short and incorrect spellings I recommend for it to be at least 6 lines

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Bri An A 09 April 2018

A short poem with many a meaning. But it could be improved. Such as when many miles apart we are could be changed to When we many miles apart, Remember I'm always there in your heart. And she should have worked on the grammar. It looks simply horrendous.

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jade h 15 February 2018

this is a very great short short poem

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