A Short Brisk Walk..... Comments

Cherishing sweet moments this line is very enjoy full10++++

Your thoughts are great but it is my personal opinion that the presentation in your first verse is not in conformity with those that follow. Your first verse is excellently put forth. The same tempo is not maintained in the other two verses and that gives less verve as the poem progresses. Your style is good. Keep writing. arya

Thanks for bringing back childhood memories, those days were so good, so free. wonderful poem

there's a moment i walked a long walks..........3 miles to school...........i told my kids...........now they treasured each sorrows and pains..........with a deep sigh....

Thanks for allowing me to take a stroll with your poem. Very enjoyable.

nice imagery in this poem...like it...

Keep writing, nice expressions...thank you..