Saturday, April 19, 2014

A Shoreline Meeting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like the swift waves breaking on the shore
You rushed into my arms breaking though my doors
Unaware I was swept off my feet
And drenched in feelings marvellous sweet.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 January 2015

I saw the bait(as the title of the poem) and got hooked and found the dish unexpectedly good.....Rajeshji......... very nicely composed with intense love feelings and the title named so beautifully.......10

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 April 2014

Wonderful poem. Interesting lines... O love, come to me once again, like in the past My eyes are scorched searching the horizon for your unlikely mast. Title quiet matches with the poem. Loved reading each lines. Thanks a lot for the inspiring comments for my poems.

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Yash Shinde 26 April 2014

A nice title dear..... A nostalgic write, Truly being desolated by someone we love truly turns utopia into desert, we burn in fore of agony and pain......... Truly passionate write.

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Valsa George 21 April 2014

Beautiful poem with a nice title...! With your eyes glued to the horizon, you are waiting for the reappearance of someone whom you loved dearly, but left drowning you in the tsunami of painful and nostalgic thoughts...! Enjoyed this passionate write!

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