Tuesday, May 26, 2009

**a Shore Of Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are like the lightest feather
Sweetest candy
The aroma from your bosom
Like amber
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Mamta Agarwal 25 June 2009

amazing last lines- very romantic, surreal.10 Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 02 June 2009

good poem...congrats

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

'When your desires to love Are like rivers in torrents And I A sand shore' sir that was simply splended..enjoyed it very mcuh

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Akram Saqib 29 May 2009

A SAND SHORE IS NOT SO WEAK AS WATER MAY BLOW IT.GOOD THEME AND EXPRESSION WONDERFUL POEM WITH WORDSWORTH TOUCH

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Muhammad Ali 27 May 2009

super..... lovely poem very soft and nice piece! 10..

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Reshma Ramesh 27 May 2009

beautiful......................

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Catrina Heart 27 May 2009

your love must be given freely without any expectations in return.....with a pure heart to mix on to color and paint the smiles.............10+++

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Naidz Ladia 27 May 2009

to be loved is not ours to do..but to love, it's our heart envolves..naizz

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Anjali Sinha 26 May 2009

wowwwwwwww sadiq what torrential desires +++10 anjali

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

The way you expressed your feelings is exciting and lovely. And you have concluded wonderfully, love with 10+++

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