You are like the lightest feather
Sweetest candy
The aroma from your bosom
Like amber
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'When your desires to love Are like rivers in torrents And I A sand shore' sir that was simply splended..enjoyed it very mcuh
A SAND SHORE IS NOT SO WEAK AS WATER MAY BLOW IT.GOOD THEME AND EXPRESSION WONDERFUL POEM WITH WORDSWORTH TOUCH
your love must be given freely without any expectations in return.....with a pure heart to mix on to color and paint the smiles.............10+++
to be loved is not ours to do..but to love, it's our heart envolves..naizz
The way you expressed your feelings is exciting and lovely. And you have concluded wonderfully, love with 10+++
amazing last lines- very romantic, surreal.10 Mamta