Tuesday, May 29, 2018

A Shooting Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

Day
Comes
Cold, chilling
Me to the bones
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Doris Cornago
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Kostas Lagos 30 May 2018

Love the darkness of this poem!

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Doris Cornago 30 May 2018

To dig deep is to find your inner strength. When you think you have nothing left to give in any strenuous situation, you dig deep and find it, that extra push, strength, or energy. This is what my daughter shouts to her basketball players when they look fazed in a slaughter by their opponents - amazingly, these two words restore their confidence and make them recover their lead during games. It's her voice reaching deep down inside.

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deborrahcornago 30 May 2018

Vacillating on deletion - this meant that I was speculating on ending a relationship by deleting my account which connected me to a significant other, We were on contrapuntal melodies and I thought, what the heck, who needs this headache? Then, the shooting star emerged and gave me my dire wish. Sorry readers, I need to make a note of this moment so I'll remember about waiting for shooting stars.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 May 2018

Doris, such an inspiring poem full of love with oneself....10+++++

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deborrahcornago 30 May 2018

Yes. It's a self-criticism, Bro. Bernard. Thank you for constantly inspiring as well. :)

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Robert Murray Smith 29 May 2018

A poem of inspiration for the lost.++10

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deborrahcornago 30 May 2018

Yes, we all truly need self-reflection when we lose our way, Thank you for this profound interpretation.

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